This is an analysis of Comala, A Dramatic Poem by James Macpherson.
This poem. is valuable on account of the light it throws on the antiquity of Ossian's compositions. The Caracul mentioned here is the same with Caracalla, the son of Severus, who, in the year 211, commanded an expedition against the Caledonians. The variety of the measure shows that the poem was originally set to music, and perhaps presented before the chiefs upon solemn occasions. Tradition has handed down the story more complete than it is in the poem. "Comala, the daughter of Sarno, king of Inistore, or Orkney Islands, fell in love with Fingal, the son of Comhal, at a feast, to which her father had invited him [Fingal, B. III.] upon his return from Lochlin, after the death of Agandecca. Her passion was so violent, that she followed him, disguised like a youth, who wanted to be employed in his wars. She was soon discovered by Hidallan, the son of Lamor, one of Fingal's heroes, whose love she had slighted some time before. Her romantic passion and beauty recommended her so much to the king, that he had resolved to make her his wife; when news was brought him of Caracul's expedition. He marched to stop the progress of the enemy, and Comala attended him. He left her on a hill, within sight of Caracul's army, when he himself went to battle, having previously promised, if he survived, to return that night." The sequel of the story may be gathered from the poem itself.
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Structure
- Rhyme scheme: a b X X X b X X X X b c d X X a b e X d X f g X X X X f X c e b fXg
- Stanza lengths: 1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,3,
- Metre: 01001001010010110010001010100100101001010000101001001101011010010100000100001011010101000101010101001010110010010110101010110000101000010010101001101010101001010101010101010110110100101010010100001011100111010110111000010011110101100010101010101111101101001010110101001100111101010011111101001010110101100100110001011101010110100101101101010100010010100111001000101010001001 010 10 100 100 100010 1000010 1 1000010101111010101100101010111011101101110111101110 10001110111111111010111011101010111101111100101001101010101001011001010 10001101010101010101100011100011100101010101101010111 10001100101111111111101010111010101010001110110101001011111001010001 100110001111011101001101001001110101011110001100111111101010011010010110101001111010110011011010110101001101010010100111001011101100010011101010010001011010 1001110101011010011010111101011110101011011011010011101110101001001 10011110101100101111101010101010010101101001111000100111101001001011010010 1001111010111000101110101011100111101110101001111010110101001 100100101010100101010110101011101011011001100111001011010001 1000101101111110100111 1000100111011101011110011011011111101110011001000100111111100111011111010100111111111010101110110001001001110010010111110101110111101101 10011110101011010101110110110111101110010110010010 10011100111011011111010111111101111101001010100011111111111110010001110100100111111100 1000110111010110011110101011101010001 100100101010001001001101011011011001111101001000100010011111110101111 1011101101001010100110110101001111101010011000100110110100110111100111011100101100010010011010010100111111010100 10011001011110101 1010010110101010111100101110010010 1001001001110110011111010111101011110101101110010 1000100111111001001101100101001001010 101110101001010111101101110101011 1110101010101011010111110101111101010110110110101010010010110011010000100101111100101011010101010101 100001111011111011101101100011 10001001010110010111110011111101101011 100101001001010110010011111101001001111010010111111011111011111111111110010011110101011110101110101110010101100011010010010101001010 111001010111110101001110101000101000101011010100111110111110111101111101111111111110110101011111010111110110101110010101111101
- Closest metre: trochaic pentameter
- Guessed form: unknown form
- Stanzas: 35
- Lines: 36
Repeated words/phrases
of, to, her, he, him, that, in, poem, she, had, his, on, son, and, night, thy, from, rise, comala, thou, o, me, behold, king, as, i, might, have, not, be, thee, my, it, fingal, cave, rest, come, roll, our, joy, carun, sons, streamy, their, soul, maid, when, lift, see, moonbeams, voice, around, at, shalt
Anaphora
Epiphora
Anadiplosis
, comala